Your poem is amazing, it describes exactly what i feel, how people never notice. keep it up

Very sad, and is true in many cases, but you are noticed more than you think. Good words, good feeling, well done
tara xxxx

Its really nice...strong words...
poems that dont rhyme are usually stronger and deeper than poems that do...
its very true...you tell people about your pain...and they think you want attention...
and if you dont then they never notice...and you only smother yourself from inside...
good work :D
youre a great friend too...keep it up sweets
dhaval.

Oh my gosh... this is such a sad poem =( I hope that you're okay hun. If you ever need to talk I'm always here... great writing though, you did a fantastic job at expressing the pain. Keep up the great work

Hi,
must say that this one was really powerful...the way u xpressed urself & the words u used...really an amazing piece of work here.

take care and all the best forever.

Just wanted to add...m not doing any favour by commenting on ur poem as i just said what i felt like after reading ..so u dont hv to return any favour too...:o)
take care