Lovely Poem!!!!!!!
Absolutley adored it!!!!

Good poem..

if you have a chance check out mine...

thanks

Wow really really sad but good

I love it 5/5

Its a great idea. But I think the rhyme sounds really forced in some parts, like you just through a meaningless word in so it would rhyme. Dont comprimise meaning for rhyme.

Interesting

Ahh. So true happens to alot of people..sad actually..very well writtne poem, flowed wonderful aswell.

Loved it...so sad
5/5

Hey,
great poem, very sad, but, well written
its sad because that scenario is very true, seeing as one of my best friends is pregnant
so i hope this diddnt happen to you
anyways good job,
5/5
take care
holly

Wow!!! This is great!!! Good Job!!

OMG I loved it!!! Great job. 5/5