Comments : Could Still Be

  • Wow this poem is amazing...i really love it and i know that u wish that can happend too...but all that u can do right now is just hope and wish 4 the best...and all i can do is stay by ur side till everything is ok again...5/5...
    love ya
    prEcIoSa

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Ohhh hunni! I got chills from this poem. It's so good... I love it. Especially how you talked about your little girl and the important times he was missing. Great job hunni, I hope that everything turns out okay

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Beautifully written!! great j0b!! very well written!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ladida

    Beautiful! It's a very touch subject and you made a great poem out of it. I just hope that you think twice about taking him back into your life, make sure that he really wants you both in his life and that it's not just the loneliness of being in jail. I say this because 2 boyfriends ago I had an experience with my guy going to jail after we broke up, while he was locked up we got back together and he said he knew I was what he wanted now and that he was gonna change, but when he got out it all went back to the way it was before. Just be careful baby! I wish you and your little girl the best! It's not fair to her for him to do this to her.

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    He definitely missed out. there's no retrieving those years back. Its nice that still has second chance but sometimes its too late.

    best wishes. great write!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy

    Awesome peom!!!! i loved it, keep writing
    Mandy

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    Wow thats sad im sry if it really happend