Bill, this was a beautiful write, emotional and sad full of sorrow and pain, I wish you to find that ray of sunshine bill, I hope it finds its way through the darkness to comfort you at this time, imagery was wonderful!

"I am awash on the sea of life rudderless and alone
Rising and falling with the swells of my life
Exposed to the elements drowning in pain
There is supposed to be so much more to this life
Somehow it has turned to heartache and strife"

Fantastic stanza well done!
Take care
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This poem was great....but it made me so sad. Don't ask why, it just did. So much sadness all together in a poem. Great poem tho. You're great.
I am looking for a ray of sun to enter my life
A passing vessel to throw me a line and give me a tow
Once I find port I know I can repair my life's ship
Until that time I will drift about on the raging sea
Watching and waiting as these changes wash over me.

^that's my favorite part of the poem ^_+

This is a beautiful peom filled with both sadness, truth and hope. you worded it really well, the end stanza really sum's up everything well. if only i could find my port. keep up the good work:)
edwina
xoxo

Filled with sadness but hopeful.... beautifully done once again.

Bill! Your one of those rare writters that make me breifly contemplate "Why write anymore? Bill says it perfectly?" Course I never do follow my own advice, eitherway, thanks for that. The topic crudely blunt, but the image you capture through that beautiful

Bill! Your one of those rare writters that make me breifly contemplate "Why write anymore? Bill says it perfectly?" Course I never do follow my own advice, eitherway, thanks for that. The topic crudely blunt, but the image you capture through that beautiful

Well done Bill - you captured your emotions well and placed them in a beautiful poem. Sad yet hopeful. Great write (as always).

Thats awsome 5/5

Wow Great Job!!! Check out some of mind some time and comment plz? I really like this poem!

Awesome poem..*5/5*..plzz take some time and vote/comment one my poems to..greatly appreciated..thnx...

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Noziyna

Wow that was just awesome thats all i have to say 5/5