Good work, this poem has very good imagery and flow to it. I'm not totally into suicide poems though.

Wow thats a very powerful poem! glad to hear you don't feel like that any longer...
~court

WoW... this is certaintly an intense poem.. i love how you write out of your true experiences which is always great to see!
this is such a powerful poem.. with so many bottled up feelings and emotions you've must have felt luckily you let it out by writing this poem.. i am very very impressed keep it up!!

--emotionless19*

I don't usually read suicide poems as much as possible because of how it makes me feel... Like how your poem makes me feel about how love can make someone pick up a knife or a pill.. It's kind of sad that love makes you feel this way once.

Anyway, back to the poem. I do like the emotions you had in these lines and how you describe your state of mind. It helps in bringing out the sorrow and pain. Nice write. =)

Wow... the flow was amazing... the emotion was pure and over all it just took your breath away when you read it... nice job...

sammie

Woah, It's been a while since I read your work man =)

This was excellent, so emotional and strong.. great power went into this like I coudl feel your anger while reading it!

You really set the atmosphere and sorta made me mad to =P

Anyhoo this is a great poem, your getting really good man REALLY good, I enjoy your work alot, so much effort put into each stanze I really loved it xD

Lisa xD

I absolutely loved this poem. The title is really catchy & the poem in itself was great.

"Bleed baby bleed" I liked that part. It's a sad poem though, And I'm glad you don't feel like that anymore. =) Keep it up!! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.