Neil, that's a good poem... I know that you have been working on it for a while... and I like how it's come... although I think it's sheer* instead of shear... Otherwise, I love it! Great job, Neil!

~BJ~

AWWWWWWWWW
So touching I know youll find her
She'll be young and hopefully a lady. . .
lol
Again I love the flow keep it up
another great read thank you
love
Em

5/5 from me love it!

Aww..i really like this poem..i hope you find the perfect girl..

Its very sweet and pretty...very nicley put together

love always,
becca

Thts so sweet!!!! xox

Great work, i thought this poem had good emotion and was beuatifully written.

Thats so beautiful neil! i hope you find her...you deserve the world =) i miss you
all my love,
cherry

Wala me ma-sey

Good poem hope u find her. and when you do dont lose her.

Dis was so sweet...n wonderful....loved it...i got u in ma favs lol...love dia mwaz xoxo