Great job, i think I know what you mean, well it can somewhat relate to a situation i'm in...luv ya!-xxx-

This was very good. i think it is really strong in teh language it uses. well done 5/5.

Suzie

Mona wonderful as usual, i can totally relate...Mona you are an amazing poet...

Interestng use of words to create a truly splended masterpiece....
Bravo....

Much Luv,
Josh

Wow.....ive been away for a while
and what better way to come back but to another great poem by you
i love it mona keep it up
love ya lotssss xxx

If it took the smile off your face, does that mean I'm back? huh huh? Maybe...

Umm anways, great poem, as always I like the rhyming scheme you seem to always use, it never gets old.

Just because, I think that Liar Liar should be the first stanza also.