Wow u r SO GOOD! wow!

This poem was exaclty how i felt last friday. i OD'd and was in the hospital for 4 days. now i'll just write how i feel. very well written.

Very deep

Loved it! 5/5

-Taylor

Darien,
I have been reading your poetry almost all afternoon! I haven't even done my homework lol, but don't worry I will! Anyways, your poem are always so unique and amazing... not only you're a poet, but an artist and also enjoy music... you're one in a million my friend...always take care.

Nicely done. as always, it's brilliant! i love the 5th stanza:

"...Waltz your way down,
a dark and lonely road.
Find the buried treasure,
I once called hope..."

such very clever word play, with depth and flow. all round excellent piece. well done once again.

I'm ccold just reading that, ouch, wouldn't like to be on the receiving of a poison pen letter from you!

Wow.. that was so powerful, so intense, amazingg! that flowed well, used great descriptive language, and was just so intense!! 5/5 p.s. thanks so much for the comments! xox!

Ummm i dont get it ) :..... but i felt the emotions and I liked it a lot even though I don't get it all that much!! haha good job still... *5*

**meggie**

All you ever knew was a lie,
and I was the truth.
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Loved those two lines. Another really cool poem. I'm not really into dark poems but this was cool =P

.x.TaLeEe.x.

This is so perfect...
loved it...

*isabel*