Hmm, it's good, but i was a little confused by it. still though, it was excellent.5/5

I think it is a good poem but the person above me has some good points..Other than that is was good and you some talent for writing

I really enjoyed this poem. The intro was amazing, and it definitely got me pumped. Every stanza following it, kept me wanting more. Right up to the end, and the last stanza, wow, very nice ending.

Really good... there's not much more I can say.

Taunting my agony with pictures of heaven just out of reach. No rest for the wicked-Is that what they preach?

Stunning lines! Absolutely heartfelt! These are lines of perfection. Awesome. Gave me chills all the way down my spine. Those lines made the whole poem for me. So true!

Really great wording ad escriptions used, your feelings really came though strongly

Excellent use of description, the emotion comes across really strongly, as an idea for improvement I have to agree with Apathetic Soul. Great write, but it might benefit from a bit more control. Other than that, brilliant stuff, 5/5 x

Very imaginative metaphors, great flow, passion which seems very real... what more could I ask for in a poem? 5 is all I can give it

This i feel is the best of your poems thati have read so far, i feel that the words flowed and you send out meaning and respose to your audience.

xxx alex xxx