BJ, that was very creative. Although the best of us feel this way many times. Nice work, I loved the emotion you put into thie piece.

-Jennifer.

Overall Rating: 4/5

Thas really gud BJ. ghehehe i loved it to read. keep up the good work. hugs and kisses. R.

Great peice, loads of emotion and very clearly written

Aazing work hun. I loved every sigle line, it caught my attention very well. Keep it up babe and Ill read more

Juls