The rhyming is great! How did you do that? Awesome. It deserves a 5/5! =) Check out my poems if u want.

This is nice too i like this one... great poem 5/5

Ur poems tell me so much about you
u r a beutiful person and im so happy to have read ur beautiful poems. im sure that
that the right person is just around the corner and if you show him what i see
he will fall deeply in love with you you are
without a doubt a beutiful person. I know cause i really don't like to many people cause people suck ur the exception. lol
if i did'nt love my wife with all my heart
i would already be on a plane to florida
theres love here for you cy