Hey, That was really good. I don't usually read the explicit poems, simply because the ones I have read I've just found to be more of a venting paragraph for people rather then a real poem. But that was excellent. I hope to see alot more from you!

It's really strange how such a sweet innocent girl can write such terrifying poetry. But I guess that's the beauty of poetry, it gives us an inner look of our fears and doubts. Anyone can write about anything. Awesome stuff Kim!!