Hey, i really like this poem but idk, the structure of it is kinda weird and i don't think it helps the poem at all...i think u should just let the lines be long and not make them so short and stuff...but other then that i really like it...e-mail me if u wanna talk...take care...laters

Wow.. amazing poem.. i liked the way you laid it out =).. this is a truely emotional poem filled with sadness.. very truthful great job keep it up =)

--emotionless19*

Hey nice poem
you deffinately have a different type of writing style
-it's cool-