OMG, are you 16 or wot, this is extremely awesome, it was like looking at a masterpiece of a famous poet, you used words I don't even know, the way you write them, with such passion and grace, this is too good...seriously...where did you learn to write such a wonderful piece...

'almandite'...?

Havent a clue what this word means...
Help?

Lv A, x

Great write. some excellent word play and language. interesting flow. i liked the concpet. all in all a well crafted poem. i particularly liked the 2nd stanza. well done.

OM GOSH U R SOOOO TALENTED I LOVE IT.. Gorgeous work..oe nof the best on this siteee

LISSA

Ii really liike thiis pOem iit iis wriitten very well! gOOd jOb!
alwaysZ hOld ya head Up...
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