I sense a lot of emotion in this poem and that speaks more than words could tell! You are obviously very talented, so keep up the fab work!

Hey.
I love this poem... i like the way you wrote it, its really very good. i hope you keep writing.

Sleeping Beauty
x x x

Hey.
I love this poem... i like the way you wrote it, its really very good. i hope you keep writing.

Sleeping Beauty
x x x

Wow! this is almost how i felt with my ex bf! its really good! Keep it up!

Thanx 4 all ur help, mallori!
this was suprisingly bangin!good job!

Nicely written poem i like the way u expressed ur feelings, it is great and keep it up, 5/5

Once again good job. Nice use of repitition, it was definently there, but not overbearing. Keep it up!!!

All i have 2 say is great poem 5/5

I personal didn't like all the I's.. I think it is supposed to be focused on you but I think it was just too much.

-Rachel
3/5

This is good, but i'm confused by it. who is this meant to? someone you like? well its good though and it flowed nicely. theres a lot of emotion in it! keep writing it! 5/5

~Kristina

Hey! Sweet poem, nicely done. I like how you used "I" as repition as well as the line 'I am sad and afraid'. You really portaryed your emotions. Keep up the awesome work!

5/5

--Angie xoxo