Hey i like this poem its short and still much better than mine....check out mine and tell me

It shows lots of feeling! its really good!
and i love the word malicious!

It shows alot of feeling in such a short poem
well done thats how i like poems so good job
keep up the great writing
check out mine sometime

**binkz**

Very good poem

I love it .its nice keep up the good work

Nice job i must say....Lovin that Repitition....Good Good Good 5/5
ttyl sometime
PeAcE
~The Poet~