Beautifully written Bill. I hope you achieve what you dream.
Take care
I hope you have a very blessed Christmas!!

Bill ,
A beautiful write from the heart ..I hope you find that smile Bill..
Enjoy your vacation and may the water carry all your bad days away ...
Will miss you bunches ...~Take care~

I love the rhyme scheme in this one. I am definitely going to miss your poems for the time you are away. I hope you come back with great stuff, such as this. You are very talented my friend. Keep writing, so I can keep reading, and learning. Awesome stuff!

Bill,
Beautiful poem! I will miss you so much, but hopefully you will find the answer there. "You take care of yourself" we'll be waiting for you.

Wonderful Bill... Good luck on your trip, I will be thinking of you my friend and wishing you a pleasant time. Great poem with lots of hope. Well done :)

Bill: Wonderful poem my friend. I am so glad that you are full of hope and excitement. In my eyes the world needs more hope and I for one am glad that you are trying to spread some around, even if only in your writing.

I know that you are going to have a great time while away on vacation... Please babe, enjoy yourself and take lots of mental notes so you can share your trip with us through your next couple of writes.

Merry Christmas babe

--Sher

Great poem Bill. If we don't have a little hope... we have nothing to cling to. I hope you find that peace that you need....Have a great vacation and be safe.
Merry Christmas
Love Ann