That poem is amazing!! There's only one thing I can give ya advice on, the rest of it was great. This part:

But if it made you happy, Id walk away from my life

That one sticks out a little bit because it doesn't follow the same rhyming pattern as the rest of the poem. And that's honestly the only advice I could give, because this poem is incredible. Hun, make sure you keep on writing cause you're doing fantastic!