Wooow great poem gurl ;)
I really loved it
thanx for the comment on my latest poem...well..life seems sux for me these dayz :(
but anyway I'll be alright :)
tc
Lov
Nema XxXxXxXxX

So so sad, but beautifully written! Great job! Truly a fantastic write!

So sad u juzt made ma eyez teary:( hope u write more n read mine

:( waaa.....im going to cry.....i love it though beautifully written
mwah xxxx
keep it up baby xxxxx
love ya lotsss xxxx

Hey hunn, good job once again, aww i hope you're okay you sound so...well down, keep writting girl im always looking forward to your poems! have a nice holiday by the way, luv ya-xxx-

That was good..the teddy bear was interesting...i like your style...i was wonderin if i could shadow this one..i think i'd screw it up..but i don't know..anyway..this was a good one..keep your head up...hit me back..peace

Awe Mona sweetie I love this so much. This is a great poem like all of yours always are! Amazing!

Wow the last stanza REALLY got me.. great poem huni.
Thank u for your comments..i love them n u!!
cant wait to read more of ur stuff..you're on my favs now=)
take care xoxoxo

What's left to cry for?
When passion choked the flower till she cried no more

Nothing.. Just nothing..

oh my gosh...those lines were so...breathtaking. incredible poem mona, after i read the poem i closed my eyes and saw the whole thing happening in my head...the teddy bear.. crushing the rose...it was just amazing how you wrote it. thanks sooo much for those sweet comments, they were so touching. keep in touch, i hope to read more wonderful poems soon!
xxxweepingxxx

Wow Mona... you're a really good writer. you have some real talent. keep it up...

Amazing poem mona
it was beautiful...I love the way that every poem you write it creates an image or a story in my mind....so clearly.
I loved this poem...it was great
well done hunni
love ya
emily
xxxxxxxxxxx

Wow..i loved that - has heaps of feelings...mwa - rock on