Comments : My Daily Chore

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl g0od j0b 0n this p0em. very well written. keep it up

  • Hey huni....sorry i havent spoken 2 u in a while! i cant comment on ur 2 other knew poems coz it wouldnt let me but all of them r great! u r so talented! babe hold on, friendships sometimes do end but i will never leave ya, i luv ya lots! im sorry that u feel terrible and that things r not going so well i luv u

  • 18 years ago

    by I.Dont.Own.Emotion.I.RENT.

    Awww Anna its soo good! but come on lets think positive! chin up hun. lyl~lex

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Wow, this is my life everyday hun, such a beautiful poem, thanks for writing it, it definetly describes me, you're not alone in this my dear, we can make it through together, hang in there,xxoo

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    I know exactly how you feel, but it does get better, it really does life is up and down that's just how things have to go and we'd never learn anything

    I make my way to school,
    Where the doom sinks deeper.
    I feel alone and used,
    This knife has become a keeper.

    that was my favorite part 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    I can relate so much to this. It's like your daily struggles never become old they just become worse sometimes. Hang in there I'm always here. xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy B

    Our lives are what we make of them.

    Nice poem. good writing
    Tim