I love this poem, its fantastic. keep it up
xxx
love Tara-Kay

Wow hunni that is really really great message. This was so so so good. So many more people should read this poem and learn from it. We only have one life and one time to enjoy it, it's not our job to cut it short when we think we at done. I have a poem with the same idea as well called Suicide Through Someone Else's Eyes so I agree with you completely.

-Tainted Mikochan

This poem portrays everything I believe in so well. Your rhyme scheme is excellent and its so inspirational and I really do love the title.

Sondos

"Broaden your horizons,
Cast away your fears.
Hold in the heartbreak,
Don't cry hopeless tears"

-An inspiring and heartfelt piece, David. Both the rhyme and imagery work very well throughout the piece and you've structured it well.

God is watching us all, David, you're right. But we needn't spend hours praying each day if we feel he is not listening. There was a reason why we are all taught the words 'Thank you' & ‘sorry’ at a very young age. :)