Its really expressive, i can kind of relate to this too? i don't write too much poems but maybe it would be a little more consistent if you stuck with a number or lines per stanza or just left it all in one instead of alternating between 3 and 4 lines??
but like i said.. i don't write much x.x... its just an idea...
... this poem was very emotional and i really liked it... the olnly thing is that try to make things flow a little more... one minute your rhyming then the next your not then you are... pick one and stick with it... other than that good work keep it up!
Wow u are living your life regretting alot of stuff and i have to say that u have to end it...you can't live like that anymore..just givin u some of my advice...5/5 thoe...its an amazing poem..keep ya head up
This was deep. and i know how you feel on pushing people away cause i do the same. i hide my feelings as well, and thats something my parents hate about me, cause they could never tell if something is SERIOUSLY wrong with me until i do something about it myself. and i pretty much always screw up. ~sorry about this~
anyways, nicely writen. it very emotionaly touches my heart and i hope things turn for the better for you soon.
Wow. Great poem! I can relate to it soo much. Excellent job. 5/5. Thanks for the comments by the way. And as for your comment about me changing the form of my poem into more than one stanza, I like to write in one stanza. I do realize that it can be hard to read, but I like it that way.. I can't explain why, haha. But thank you for the input hun.
I enjoyed reading your poem very much...I write about pain, but not the
kind that you have suffered...Don't
ever give up on love nor the so many
good things it has to offer...I also write
about truth...Which is something I
believe you have faced many times..
That is one part of truth you should
never have to face again..There are
good men out there...Read my poem
Forty years ago....Its a true story...