Nice job hun very sad. keep up the good work

Awww thats really sweet and sad
I hope that its not true and that you are still here writing as beautifully as you always do, im here for you so stay strong. If you ever need to talk im here i promise,just email me at lonely_girl_2005@hotmai.com we can talk about anything, from sex to suicide. ok?
Love always, Trisha

Wow i really like your work, your style is great everything always flows and your rhyming is never weak it's always interesting and everything just goes right along its really good 5/5

Great job, nice descriptions! keep it up

That was special. It was dark, and despaired, but very calm. *shivers* like suicide.

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Great poem, yuo could really feel it.

5/5

Wow thats an amazing poem! its very sad, but excellently written 5/5
take care huni,
xxEmmaxxx

A fantastic poem full of emotion - its a shame tho because the topic was so sad and shocking. I cant say that I felt what you felt but I think that everyone has at least a tiny part of them that thinks of that or has thought of that. I hope you are ok now and thanx for the comment =)

A fantastic poem full of emotion - its a shame tho because the topic was so sad and shocking. I cant say that I felt what you felt but I think that everyone has at least a tiny part of them that thinks of that or has thought of that. I hope you are ok now and thanx for the comment =)

This poem was very nice I loved it ever last line of it. I know how you feel jsut keep on going you'll never know where you might be xox Rachel

I love this poem,,, its really great,, i know how it feels to be depressed, try and check out my poems,i this u'll like the one called "i guess thats why we never spoke", i just love ths poem,, iam putting u on my favrites list,,

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Good, but quite predictable to be honest and I think you can do better :). I congratulate you on writing with an interesting structure of rhymes, which is something that is difficult to do. I advise you put in some punctuation though, simply because it can bring a poem to life believe it or not.
Good job and Good luck!
kt.

This piece was short and to the point, which helped emphasis the subject it was written about.

Keep writing
Nici

Interesting poem and sadful meaning I hope things are well with you and be strong!
nice job

-Josiah

Oh very nice. Short, but very expressive and to the point. The 4th line is my favorite. Great job

Wow u are a great poet...and congrats at gettin 3rd in my contest!

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Short and sweet loved the poem. keep up the great work.
Emma 5/5

Wow ur poems r so meaning full its beautiful

Damn, that was good, sad thought, which obviously you were aiming for, but I'm glad your alright

Liked the poem but i think you should smile more. nice job