*Mouth drops open* Its fantastic, your poems have such intense, numbing wonderful qualities. Although I would like to see another theme as its starting to all seem so similair, each piece is its own and wonderfully unique.

Brilliant poe. deep and powerful. well done.

5/5

Good poem with the great flow! Very well done!

Damn! I really don't know what to say! This is beyond words! It's one of the best poems I've read in quite a while! The ending really packs a punch, amazing! Oh and I also really like the second stanza!
Keep it up~Holly

I'm proud, :D u have done the dark, and fantasy justice... best i have read in a while... sad to say i dont think i do justice lately but i will once again. ;)
keep going strong

-faithfulserenity