Yeah I liked it! It has a nice flow and the content is emotional! Good job!

Nice poem...advise-dont make it rhyme!

I really liked this poem... it almost seemed like a song to me... it flowed well and was simply beautiful! i dont understand why people did not think that you deserved a 5?!? i think a 5 is exactly what you deserve... i see that you put a lot of time and effort into this and thats what i like... you did a wonderful job and i am extremly impressed! keep it up!

sammie

I loved it, i gave you a 5. um, the only thing i could find wrong with it was your rhythm was a little bit off in some lines. other than that... EXCELLENT!!!!!!!
**lisa**

I love the refrence to the angel and wings. How romatic this poem is and he is so lucky to have someone like you who loves him with all their heart.

--Sher

Nice change hun and yes you are good at these! guess that just proves you have true talent xox