I luv this poem Alyson. You should write more poems.

Wow thats great!!! i love it. it was very effective, and it flowed so beautifuly. well done!!

Ruby

Of the three poems I've rated for you this is my favorite!!!

Very strong poem, the title gave me an expression of a nature poem. Guess I was wrong, lol. Try to work on the flow.

Wow saying God cant do everything thats umm saying something lol I dont know if I agree but yeah good job with the poem didnt see that coming at the end.

I find this truly breathtaking. I am stunned

Wow this was soooo good i loved it

tabbby

Other great poem. Although the flow was hard to follow in the first few stanzas I liked it. Other thing in the 5th stanza you refer to God as a women but than you go back to referring God as a man. Its just some I caught while reading it. I loved the poem though, like I said before in the other comments your an a amzing writier.
~Juls~

Wow loved it...the last stanza was my favorite.....I can really relate to this poem...This poem was without a doubt a 5......Thanks for the comment....I always return the favor

This was great. And its so true. God can`t do everything. 5/5 This was awesome!!

luv nataliw x-x