Comments : Yours For the Taking

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Heyy!
    Happy christmas hunny! lol well done i really like the repition in the last stanza=) I hope you have a good Holday and Ill talk to you soon hunny!

    Love Always
    Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    I love the poem, u fill it with so much i dont no desire i suppose and its noce to no that not all guys aree jerks. good work

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Hun you can never stand alone even if hadnt found this new happiness you would always have us lot on here! 5/5 though (as always) xox