That was moving... u are a very talented writter... keep it up... u will continue to read yours... but im also asking you to do the same if you so wish...

kaykay

I really really like this poem. it was beautiful. and i think you could win that contest and should put in for you. you are a very talented writer. KEEP IT UP!
♥

Aw that was beautiful, shes a lucky girl whoever she is. 5/5 jesx

Grreat work, its such a sweet poem. Love it and keep up the great work

Juls

Wow i know just how you feel i felt the same way about my guy bestfriend but i told him and he felt the same been with each other for 8 months. amazing write very deep and meaningful keep up the good work 5.5

Wow, this poem is truly amazing and whoever it is about is absolutely lucky. She seems like an amazing person. I hope everything goes well for you and her.

Lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

That was GREAT!
I really loved it man!
It explains exactly how I feel.
Hope someday you the girl.
Good luck and best wishes :)
Your flow was right one and everything rocked!!!

It's wonderful. This is a great poem. You should make a song on it! Spectacularly put. Good Job.

~JR

Awww
so you have a friend that you like as well i see, so you do know what i am talking about

well, good job on this poem, you clearly have a passion for the girl you were describing
lovely

This is a beautiful poem, it flows rly well
X lonelynow X
p.s. thnx 4 commenting on my poem

Perfect. the imagery in this is beautiful, and the concept is really moving. amazing stuff, well done.
stef/xx

Wow sum friend

This is do good, you describe this person in so many different ways, i think im in love with her now! jk but reat job for real!!!!

Awwwwwww! Young love! So cute, so well portaied-sp?- lol Well done hunny, I wish you all the luck in the world, Love is a tricky thing, but just well done, good rhymes btw=) cant wait to hear more from you!

Love Always
Jenn

I luv that. You got talent. Hope you get what you want :)

You really can write! I won't have matched affection with complexion 'cos I'd never have thought of it. keep going!

Hey this is a very good poem. i like how u write. well hope everything works out with you guys. this is a realy cute poem.

Sweet poem

That was so detailed and so strong! in the end when u said she was just a friend my mouth dropped! but i still related to u. she's lucky to have someone who thinks of her like that. keep writing ur talented!