Comments : The day i died

  • 18 years ago

    by cassanova

    Dont just read please rate also

  • 18 years ago

    by Megan

    Hey I just wanted you to know that that is a really awesome poem...Im sorry that you lost her...but have you ever tried to go over and talk to her...or if she wont talk then give her a letter tellin her how you feel :)...but newayz u ever wanna talk then email me mnf02@hotmail.com PLEASE read/comment on mine too

  • 18 years ago

    by Peach

    I read this poem and it made me think of me and my boyfriend. He told me things from his past and was so certain i'd turn and run from him,not being able to deal with what he'd said like all the rest. whatever reason you and her couldn't work through things, try and find comort that you will find another.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    Oh i loved this poem too so much! I can't understand, how time changes people.. and that one day they are here and they say that they love us, and then the next all the feelings are gone, and they cant be with us anymore.. and thats so scary! but i hope your days are brighter now=)

  • 16 years ago

    by Norbert

    Yeah it is kinda like my poem.
    I really like it!!!
    Thanks for showing me!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by jojo88

    I'm sorry about nokle u rilly love her

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Your poems are so good because you write about things that really have happened to you. I hope someday I will have the courage to do that! Beautiful poem, sad but you really know how to express your feelings. I hope it helps a little.

    5/5 always Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by ali

    That was really awesome, sorry i've only just got round to reading it
    it was so sad and so true, i know how that feels, where emotion just takes over, and how strong did they wanna be?!
    really really good
    5/5!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kris

    It's very good, and so sad.
    I like it.

  • 14 years ago

    by Su

    This is sweet