Insightful and heart breaking Hunny. I dont know you well or at all really but if you ever need someone Im always here to help=) Poem wise it was long and wonderful. I simply loved it then again its hard for me to find a poem I hate=P lol well keep it up Ill be watching=)

Jenn your loving club assitentie person=)

Wow! its a very good and STRONG poem...!! good job on it

The emotion you put into this piece is beautiful. I can complete relate. It's a great poem. Great job!!!

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Great job!!! keep em up!

Hang in there...great poem, u r one of the more talented ones on this site!

You are great writer/poet...welcome to my favourites! 5/5 I like this so much it reminds me someone from my past...thnx for sharing this...check mine and tell me what you think...Thnx again

This show so much feeling. You did a really good job transferring emotions to paper. It's really beautiful! :)

As the name shows i can sooooooo relate xept with a guy who actualy happens to be a friend but if u ever wanna talk im always here and listening. take care and god luck with the girl and my advice thingy is if she can't see u then she's not worth it ur worth better then her and love ur self and hold urself in high self mesteem cuz if u dont then no one will

Oh and u told me u wish u could write like me? have u no noticed your own talent yet? you r one great poet and u write with great feeling and emotion and u well make ppl think deeper than face value and i apreciate that in your work

Read this poem and you'll understand why I wish I could write as good as you!!! Very sad and depressing, I really liked the line "i can't go on knowing that nothing i do is enough." because its not only bullshi* its has very deep meaning, and it makes me think maybe i'm not doing enough...

and can u please say wt u mean by its bulshit.

Read this poem and you'll understand why I wish I could write as good as you!!! Very sad and depressing, I really liked the line "i can't go on knowing that nothing i do is enough." because its not only bullshi* its has very deep meaning, and it makes me think maybe i'm not doing enough...

and can u please say wt u mean by its bulshit.