THAT WAS A VERY TOUCHING POEM....REALLY SAD, BUT YOU'RE VERY TALENTED. GREAT POEM 5/5 KEEP IT UP AND ALWAYS TAKE CARE.

Wow this poem is really good!! i've totally felt like this before! you know how to connect with your readers! good job!!

*KaLiN*

That was sad very nice,touching read some of my others featured in my profile

You're a great writer...you commented on one of my poems asking how you move on and take a risk with someone else with all the hurt you've recieved in the past...well here's my answer....you can't sit and grieve over a guy who didn't care enough about you to treat you right...yes it's hard to move on, but don't you think it's better to find someone who will treat you right rather than hurt you all the time....I took the risk and am in the best relationship I've ever had. I'm gonna add you to my favorites because you're a great writer...keep em' coming. :)