"all of us are something but none of us are everything". you are something and u should be more confident in order to show ppl that !! u put urself down and if u dont believe in urself, noone will !! so stand up tall and smile.. and ppl r going to smile back at u !

I FEEL LIKE THIS POEM WAS ALL ABOUT ME, SO I WANT TO THANK YOU FOR LETTING ME KNOW I AM NOT ALONE.

"Only A Worthless Being Stuck In A Life Thats Unwanted" that line says so much in such a concise and expressive way.

i think this peice it good, it says a lot

5/5

This poem also could go somewhere if you would want to revise it now that you have learned how to write better. You have a good feeling here, a good foundation that could be buit on if you wanted to.

-Tainted Mikochan