by Samantha
I really liked this! it was very creative and heartfelt! some of the spelling isnt great thought... try going back through and correcting some of your errors... other than that i loved this! 5/5 keep it up! |
Short and sweet |
Very touching... i like the way its worded and how u can let thats person go and go for a new life...good job 5/5 |
Yeah me too i loved the fact that even though through the most part of the poem you're declaring how much you miss him and love him and you want to be with him in the end.......you think about yourself and you take control of the situation. It was beautiful!!! |