Well thats really a unique vision!! atleast i never thought this way before & i liked the idea..somewhere seems to be the answer to my poem "tell me why"..we really do hv that chemistry!!

very nicely written...spl the first stanza

insaano ki kya baat kahoon
maana jalna uski fitrat me hai.
lekin khuda to usse bad kar hai
to fir usko kyu humse jalan hai.

u really add that xtra depth whenever u write in hindi or may be i just feel that xtra punch..

keep it up...great work

You indeed are deep thinker with a good poet , keep up the good work dear.

God bless you
chavii

Hi,
Great tht u hav written in Hindi..it reminded me of the numerous ghazals I hav come across :)
but on a more serious note I agree to wat u hav put in ur poem..its very sad tht u part with the ones u r ready to give ur life for..its sad..life is cruel..All I can say is I hope u dont go thru all tht Im going thru..Keep Smiling :)..Hav a great year ahead..
Thnx for ue comments..mayb u cld read As You Leave Me..it sums up my state of mind..
Take Care.

We love one special person far too much in our life and we end up getting hurt.But for god everyone is special and he equally loves all of us,So it is hard to imagine or tell,how much of pain he is being put through...but he still smiles,b'coz he knows love is onething,that hurts with its pain and heals with its pleasantness...
So enjoy while it lasts and cherish it in your memory for the rest of ur life....take care and keep smiling,Bharti...
Wish you a very very happy and prosperous New Year....Bye

Interesting... I like the variation of your thoughts... Nice to see that this was written in Hindi... Must say-- nice job.. keep writing...

Love,
Ipsita