Omg girl this is excellent. i hope u get better and are able to get to england to u can finally hug ur bf.
luv ya heaps
amy

Im so sorry that you're sick.. stay strong and dont give up k? i love this poem it teaches people a good lesson about how we should never let go. thanks for sharing your own experiences great write!

--emotionless19

I havent read any of your other poems..yet..but I felt I'd comment on this one. I dont know how it feels with the whole being sick thing..but my girlfriend and I have a long distance relationship also..So I kind of understood the parts about not being able to hold eachother..it kinda, stood out more to me. Well 5/5. Take Care.

Wow that poem was good and deep pplz should just take a sec to comment cause its great.n e ways can u comment and rate on my couple poems cause imma rate all of yours

That's so sad :(
I hope you get to see him..
All the luck and take care xx

Hey Steph, this is a good poem. I hope that you get your hug from your bf in england, and I hope you get better. This is the only poem I read, but I want to read more.

Woah, this was awesome. I love the message its so true. You never know when you're going to lose a loved one. I hope you get better, you'll be in my prayers. Keep up the great work. Stay strong and take care XXXXX
JL