LOVEEEEEEEE! Simply astounding. the metaphors the eeeeek omg I want to steal it lol Brill sweetie!

Much love
Jenn
PS: loveeeeee
Watching her shielding masterpiece, she smiles.
No one is to get through these walls, she believes.
No one is to destroy her barrier, her fence.
No one is to enter her world, restricted.
Sheer brill!

I loved it! Keep up the good work.

Super poem as always! thnx 4 commenting on mine :)

love mark xxx

Wow, another really well written poem.
I liked the way this poem can mean different things, it's clever. Well Done !!!!
5/5

xxx cici xxx

Yay back to metaphor poems!!!!! *does happy dance* erm yes...
nah seriously i love it hun still doesnt beat actress but brill xox

Faaaaantastic. loved it. ^_^

Thats an awesome poem, great job, keep it up. thanks for commenting on my poem also. Amie