WOW! this was so amazing! i absolutly loved the ending! it was just... wow... i dont even know what to say! this was truley breathtaking and you are most certainly being added to my favorites! very nice work! 5/5!

sammie

There was so much beautiful imagry in this one!
yet another of yours i love!

candied hearts
hard as stone
and yet they beat
and love alone

my favorite line ever. the symbolism is dripping. loved it! 5/5 hun!
(this is jenny, my old name was Jen by the way. im now known as lushed. haha. just for a change!)

This poem is very good! i loved it. 5/5
& thanks for your comment!

Hard as stone
and yet they beat
and love alone
(( I loved these lines..))

I didn't much care for the one words and at the end.. But I did like the rest. Very nicely written, is all I can say.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Aww. I liked the last stanza a bit. Only because it was original I think lol. I did like how you explained your heart and stuff. It really added to the poem. Great job! 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow this poem is so good! i love it all n think that the last paragrah (one word per line) is amazing!

First, this poem held short lines but proves that even short words (Ordinary words) can hold real strong emotion. The descriptions were original and cliche at the same time.
candied hearts
hard as stone
This description seems cliche to me but then you go on and describe it in more detail instead of leaving it as what it stands.
and yet they beat
and love alone
I liked the originality in this and how though both lines begin with and the flow is spot on and the rhyme did not appear forced. It had sadness to it without begging to have it. Very important in writing a poem.
faith
lies
hate
guise
truth
spies
love
dies
Rereading the above lines I liked how one word was being described by the word below it though the word guise kind of throws me off.

Some of your poems are great but this poems deeply touch my heart very impressive and the rhyme was good

Really unique piece! I love the format; it really makes it interesting to read---You used strong words throuhgout the poem, and really protrayed emotion!
Great work!

By the way, 5/5! =D

Again your rhyming was amazing. 5/5 you deserve NO less. how did you get a 4.6 ? when you deserve nothing short of 5.

I like this poem a lot! It had very nice flow, and was easy to read. But, still being simple, it has a lot of depth to it. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Another great poem by you........

Not bad itz good 4/5

A very interesting poem with some really outstanding lines. Well done.

Hm, for some reason, I didn't think the last bit of the poem worked with the rest of it. But if you were to take it out, it would ruin the ending... I dunno.

You describe things in your poetry really well, choosing the right words. Keep it up.

Natalie``

O0o I really like this one!! the ending especially! another great read!! keep it up, you're a great poet!! < 3 Ciao...xx

Beautiful job. The last part of the poem was very creative and unique. Keep it up

Wow what a flush of newness lol i loved it so much i really adore your poems you are fantastic and unusual its so ffn cool i love your work xxx alex xxx (3)

Wow, wonderful just freakin wonderful! Breath taking, just wow all around! FANTASTIC job with this one!

candied hearts
hard as stone
and yet they beat
and love alone

My favorites lines throughout the whole thing, you worded these so well.
Great job with this one! 5/5 Keep it up!
Thx for the comment, it meant a lot!

Innoc3ntStar