This poem had great language but it's meaning was struggling through the beginning of the poem. I understood what you were trying to say by the end, but the beginning was a bit merky. If you ever edit it and want me to read it again let me know. Still a nice piece of work.

-Tainted Mikochan

Wow matt! that was such an amazing poem! i read it like 3 times and loved it! and i can return ur v.kind comment in saying i really think u are one of the greatest poets here! honestly ur poetry is stunning and i feel honoured to have ur lovely comments :)!!

and also...HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! hope u have a wonderful day hun!
take care,
luv emxxxxxxxx

Wow matt this is amazing, really and truly good, i haven't tlaked to you in a bit, how sad

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

A warning ;o haha, you should've put a a danger Extremely awesome poem sign there, this is amazing hun, wow HAPPY BIRTHDAYY hehe, you are such a great poet hehe, :) Soon you're gonna be famous I can bet anything hehe, keep on writing my dear, take care,xxoo

Aww that was amazing like always great work hun you're an awesome poet and very talented mmmuuuaaahhh there i kissed you (he he) well i love to read more
Love Bunches
~Carly~

Aww that was amazing like always great work hun you're an awesome poet and very talented mmmuuuaaahhh there i kissed you (he he) well i love to read more
Love Bunches
~Carly~

Hey that was awsomely cool, ( even though I had to check what some of the words in the beginning meant to understand it) I could never write as good as you...You sound so much older, I'm amazed im the same age. But really, it was coolbeans. 5/5.

And I forgot, Happy Birthday Matt! Have a good one. - ALi

Hello again, it's not ur best work ha? To me it is, your best work must be incredibly awesome..love it...and happy b-day 2 u...

This poem rocks, it has a lot of meaning, and i think it is great work lol i cant wait to read your "best" work

Wow...its reallly good. If this isnt you best work I need to read the other stuff...

Excellent. very touching. nice work. Happy New Year!

This is truely a great poem and if its not ur best i am curious to know what is
oh and just a pointer when you say forever dont because when you do it never lasts but maybe you will be an odd one and make it last hopefully that is what will happen for you

Great poem matt..im simply blown away.
sorry i havent commented lately..ive been away from the internet for ages.
About this poem..truly inspirational.
i really enjoyed reading it.
You hold so much hope..thanks for sharing it in your exceptionally awesome writing.
PS:im sorry i forgot ur bday...i didnt actualy forget it but i couldnt send u anything:'(
much love xoxoo

I love it matt :-) O ya. I guess i havn't lost it! IM so happy. will u tell some of ur friends to check me out? I love ya. Thank you for commenting. Nice job urself :-)

--Dory ((THE best friend :-p))

Once again all I can say is wow, 5/5!