I see -only the surface-
I hear -only what wants to be heard-
I feel -only as deep as the pierce-
I taste -only the pain toward-
I smell -only the obnoxious melancholy-

I really loved these few lines. Nice job hun.

-Tainted Mikochan

Thats really good. i love it and you have to really pay attention to understand the point. great poem. 5/5

.::Diana::.