Wow, this was really cute I really liked the end with the message to everyone Keep it up good-job

It was really kool i liked it!!

This is sad but really good, keep it up, great job, 5* -becky

I like its so good heheh but kinda sad but still good thanks
marady

5/5

I love your poem, thanks for writing it, it was so inspiraring, would you mind checking out mine?? --- Yours Truely
Shayna

5/5
it was really great
keep writing!

I love this poem alot. i like poems like this.

Wow i really liked this one! so many good lines, u r really talented

Awww...i really felt the hurt from this poem : ( it was written very well keep it up!

Awwww 5/5 def
it was soo cute!!! it flows so perfectly and its written with such meaning and its soo easy to relate to. i really liked it, there are so many good expressions in it!!! :)

Another beautiful poem!! its obvious you have talent....and i really like the message you gave out in this poem...you just won a spot in my favourites. im looking forward to reading more!!5/5

This is soooo sweet and sad all in one!

5/5 Ingrid

WOW!!
It's very good.
I love it, especially the last paragraph.
It is excellent advice.

As much as i love this its kinda hard to read.

In some places I thought the flow was off a bit but I still have that trouble too. Excellent poem and very sad. 5/5

Great job i really enjoyed reading this poem

This poem is bueatiful!

Wow very powerful poem hunn i loved it you put a lot into it and the emotion was amazing 5/5 <33 *hang in there sweetie : ) *

Thank you for writing such a touching poem. i can't tell you in words how good this poem is.