Comments : Darkness on the Edge of my Soul

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    8-) Bill,
    You have a good soul, you're amazing. I'm glad that you've never let all those things get to your heart/soul...you're always you. ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Wow, beautifully written! I love the whole idea, it's simply great! What a powerful message! Excellent!

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Excellent write Bill... A real inspiration to us all! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Brilliantly written peice.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lyn

    A good poem that says so much about the writer. Doing the right thing is not always easy but it will always defeat darkness in the end.

  • 18 years ago

    by mkml

    Brilliant. Very deep and heartfelt. 5/5! Your a great writer, keep writing!

    Chelseyy

  • 18 years ago

    by eric

    Positive outlook and a great poem 5/5 :)