Comments : Her Eyes

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Another well done poem. I don't think you lost any 'writer's touch' at all. You seem like a really strong writer whom I could probably learn alot from. Again I have no complaints, but just so this is not like every other post, I thought I'd tell you my favourite line:
    making her a mother to all the hearts her eyes behold.

    Greating wording!