Nice poem hun very cute and sad it's really hurts when you can be with that one person. keep up the good work hope things get better

Oh my gosh, May... this is my favorite poem of yours. Actually it's one of my favorite poems I've ever read. This is AMAZING hun... the rhyming pattern was so flawless, and I loved how you kept saying the Let's Be Friends part. Goll I love this... keep up the amazing writing!

Hey May. this is a great poem. i mean can u write anything LESS then AMAZING. lol, well keep up the work.
later,
cheryl