I liked the ending but i think u should explore more directions for endings. it was a good poem tho and the rhyming was good.plz comment on mine too if u hav the time.

Girl dont change a thing its excellent. the ending makes the poem! i love it
happy new years
amy

Beautiful! DON'T CHANGE ANYTHING! I loved it 5/5

Your Poems seem to do a lot with Losing a Loved One, Im sorry if any of these happen, This poem was Great thought i can even feel the power and emotion in this poem...Great Great Great Great 5/5

Great peice. i really like the ending, it worked really well

This is a very good poem and yes this ending worked. Keep up the good work, your really good... 5/5 ... read mine if you want, I only have 4 so far but Im gettin there lol..

-Krystal