Comments : Close your eyes, dear

  • 17 years ago

    by ~DyingBlackRose~

    Hey great poem!!! I loved it. Thanks for commenting on my poem. Much appreiciated.

    Take Care

    ~DyingBlackRose~

  • 17 years ago

    by Paul

    Touching poem...It left me almost speechless...I love it.

  • 17 years ago

    by CuteCleaver14

    Hey I like this one, it has good fluency and it is kinda sad, I hope that you keep writing, and keep up the good work ~Kayla~

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaitlin

    You might not know me but this poem is the best I have ever read. It has so much emotion and feelings to it. I loved the rhyme scheme it went well
    The format and well everything in it was awesome If any time you want to read and comment on my poems you may and if you do rate them to please