Wow.. that is an amazing poem... you are such a talented writer! the last line "he only hell that can exist is a place where Love is not" means so much and has so much feeling and emotion to it. your words are pretty much flawless and you explain everything so well! amazing poem =)

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Wow there is so much emotion in this! well done! wow i love it!
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With a first glance at the title I thought it's going to be a fantasy write, but I was really amazed that it is something about life and love.

I like how you started off the first stanza. It is one that draws you in to the poem. And the questions kind of make the meaning you expressed here understood. The rhyming is great too, with a abab cdcd pattern. It doesn't sound force and it helps with the flow!

To me this poem is flawless and I enjoy it very much and also the meaning behind it. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece. =)

The emotion in this poem is awesome i love it congrats on the good poem