Comments : Sometimes

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Nice poem hun i know what you mean it's hard but if you really love him dont give up 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by pseudo

    Wow.. what a beautiful poem.. its true in relationships we take things for granted but we always see thru to the light and be able to look at the good side.. your poem flowed nicely and had such a wonderful meaning to it.. very well written poem! keep up the great work =)

    --emotionless19*

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky

    Wow this poem is soooooo good. I have seen this happen so many times, people forget about their love then they fight and such and eveything goes down the drain. It is truly so sad and I hope that you are ok. I would be honored if you wanted to tlak to me, I think i could try to help you, thats one thing i pride myself on is my ability to help other. 5/5

    lots of love
    *~*Becky*~*