Wow, this is a good poem.
~Allana~

Awww i really like this its sweet but sad..........

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I like this poem a lot, especially the last paragraphs, it was great how everything fit..keep it up/

Wow!! i really liked n i guess thats how i pictured my death. good work xxx

Wow that's so sad! That's all I can say about the content, but it was beautifully written! Keep it up, as I go cry! Lol!

Wow weird! haha no but pretty good i must say. i can see that u have talent a little longer and u could be ritting the next book of award winning poetry book lol
god bless you
xoxoxo justwant2smile

Omg tht is lik totally how i feel i totally love it omg i totally said totally to much but ya it rocks

Yeh i agree with the ablove one
i can relate to it heaps
the fact that u can make so many people feel the same emotions as u is a sign of sucess! keep up the great work! :) p.s. i really like the flow and the rhyming of it!

This poem is terrific! I loved it, it made me cry.... very great job 5/5