Wow this is really good, i love it. its very strong and real. its like the boy just wanted to be excepted by his own family. it honestly almost made me cry. really good work! 5/5

love always, cari

Your poem touched my heart! A family is one of the things that you’re supposed to be able to turn to. It's horrible how cruel it can all be! Very nicely written... Maybe it will open a few people’s eyes to realize we're all the same in the end.

Aw thats sad.
I got lost a couple times
kinda confusing ..
But over all it was really good.