This poem is really good. I like how the last stanza links the 2 parts together. The rhythm is there, everything works. Nice work xxx

This poem totally captures life after splitting from the person you love. I like the three part structure too, its a nice touch! keep up the gr8 poems!

Aww i can really relate to this.. Excellent job hun

BRILLIANT!!! I loved it - in fact I felt it. You've got a great talent - keep it up. =)

Stef its brilliant! one of the best in my opinion ^^ well done 5/5 xxx

You're right, that's just like mine, only you are better at keeping it short than me, i get a little carried away sometimes haha. good work though!

Wow this is great this is exactly how i feel i felt exactly what you were writing about

The night sucks. Just when you lieing down trying to sleep.
Your poem rules. As always.
Lv A, x